During class myself and 11 other students analyzed and critiqued each others work on our blogs. The purpose of this was to help each other improve on our work but to also explain the positives of each others work. After reading my feedback carefully I will adjust my work accordingly to improve my blog by working on the improvements which occurred more than once. A common response for improving my blog was to include more time management/current posts therefore I will update my posts more often. A common positive comment I received was that the genre research and design I had in mind was clear throughout my blog, which is important for the target audience. Overall I am happy with my positive comments and I will review the improvements suggested to develop on my blog.


